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A Brony's Blue
Soundtrack 1 :www.youtube.com/watch?v=52_aCV… For title page only.
Soundtrack 2 :www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsscLO… - Farewell to peace by Kenji Kawai
Details : After a long wait and troubles over my uni work I finally managed to create this reduced short story about my OC character 'Neon' who is the leader of famous pop rock band of 5 who travels around Equestria. There will be more stories about her visit to Ponyville and Manehattan etc with back stories of the band members too.
But the one I present you now is about her childhood life with a man named George Crawford and her extraordinary experience with the world she traveled to.
The details of how she got teleport to the human world will be shown later.
This is the first edition and the first ever complete lengthy comic I've ever done. The second refined edition maybe done later with more details added to the story.
This comic was done with pen and water colour
So I leave you now to enjoy the story and Merry Christmas and happy new year.
I sti-i-ill break down crying.
I still feel the Feels.
once again, I am stunned.
This was absolutely beautiful. The art was inspired. And the story was as touching now as it was when i saw it a few years ago. I applaud you sir.
however there is one thing that bugs me. Has the story changed at all? I'm not sure but i thought originally in order to save neon George hit her and gave her amnesia. Or was i just imagining things through all the tears?
anyway, thanks again. You are very talented.
WHY, WHY did it have to be so SAD and SO BEAUTIFUL! This story is so touching and so mesmerizing it borders on being one of my all time favorite pieces. The quality for an ink and watercolor done comic is out standing and merits the use of astonishing and masterful.
I have to say thank you for this wonderful story but why must it be true.
(3 hours later) May I dare to say that this made me cry more than My Little Dashie, and with less time? Because it did. I think what makes this the better fiction is the new character, and the fact that the man doesn't get a second chance after leaving Neon, he dies after reflecting on his actions. And that...*chokes up a bit* makes this absolutely beautiful. N-now-now gimme another moment... *blows nose*
I felt that it cannot be said that my comic is better in anyway than My little Dashie and I would like to personally think so . My little Dashie is very well written and I do very much respect the author. I guess different fans like different things.
Anyway, loved it then and I love it now, great story bro, but I don't really wanna read it again. It's one of those stories you'll remember possibly for your whole life, but rarely would you want to come back to something so heart wrenching.
Great job, great job.
Bravo to you, for such a beautiful comic!
God fucked up somewhere...
On that note, I had to look at the URL to figure out what the title of this comic is, so I think it's fair to say that your title page failed its purpose.
...I'm crying fountains of sad...
- Charles Spencer Chaplin -
Everytime I look at something related to MLP, fan-fictions, wonderful fan arts, those words resonate in my head, and nothing can describe it more than your work now.
On the brink of tears.