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Fillies and gentle colts the red snail is proud to present

A Brony's Blue

Soundtrack 1 :www.youtube.com/watch?v=52_aCV… For title page only.
Soundtrack 2 :www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsscLO… - Farewell to peace by Kenji Kawai

Details : After a long wait and troubles over my uni work I finally managed to create this reduced short story about my OC character 'Neon' who is the leader of famous pop rock band of 5 who travels around Equestria. There will be more stories about her visit to Ponyville and Manehattan etc with back stories of the band members too.

But the one I present you now is about her childhood life with a man named George Crawford and her extraordinary experience with the world she traveled to.

The details of how she got teleport to the human world will be shown later.

This is the first edition and the first ever complete lengthy comic I've ever done. The second refined edition maybe done later with more details added to the story.

This comic was done with pen and water colour


So I leave you now to enjoy the story and Merry Christmas and happy new year.
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:iconearlannex:
EarlAnnex Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
N-no matter h-how m-many times I-I read this,
I sti-i-ill break down crying.
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:icondoublebman13:
DoubleBMan13 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
I've read this twice.
I still feel the Feels.
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:iconyoyoyoyo2:
yoyoyoyo2 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Hey there, I just thought you should know, the 2nd link for audio is broken. The video was taken down.
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Ahh ok :) I shall look that up.
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Done :)
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yoyoyoyo2 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014

once again, I am stunned.

This was absolutely beautiful. The art was inspired. And the story was as touching now as it was when i saw it a few years ago. I applaud you sir.

however there is one thing that bugs me. Has the story changed at all? I'm not sure but i thought originally in order to save neon George hit her and gave her amnesia. Or was i just imagining things through all the tears?

anyway, thanks again. You are very talented.

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Jacob3908 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Must *sniff* NOT *sniff* cry...

*cries*
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GREATEXPECTATION Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Every single time. I just break down crying.
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:iconredcomet519:
redcomet519 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
i wanted to read a something moving and i did, thanks for the story! kinda reminded me of My Little Dashie.
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:iconarthurfalconreach:
ArthurFalconreach Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Right in the feels.
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:icongrimcjr:
GrimCJr Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sobbing and clapping*

WHY, WHY did it have to be so SAD and SO BEAUTIFUL! This story is so touching and so mesmerizing it borders on being one of my all time favorite pieces. The quality for an ink and watercolor done comic is out standing and merits the use of astonishing and masterful.

I have to say thank you for this wonderful story but why must it be true. :(
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
^_^
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XXDJ-PON-3XX26 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Artist
wuts it say
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:iconfuturehunter98:
Futurehunter98 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
It's so beautiful.
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RoboRolled Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
*sobbing and clapping*
(3 hours later) May I dare to say that this made me cry more than My Little Dashie, and with less time? Because it did. I think what makes this the better fiction is the new character, and the fact that the man doesn't get a second chance after leaving Neon, he dies after reflecting on his actions. And that...*chokes up a bit* makes this absolutely beautiful. N-now-now gimme another moment... *blows nose*
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escagorouge Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
XD thankyou haha.

I felt that it cannot be said that my comic is better in anyway than My little Dashie and I would like to personally think so :). My little Dashie is very well written and I do very much respect the author. I guess different fans like different things.
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:iconroborolled:
RoboRolled Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
*hug*
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
*hugzies*
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
So yeah its not better than MLD
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:icondarkenonymous:
Darkenonymous Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I loved it. I, too, shall cry manly tears. ;-;
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superpika293 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a work of art in comic form. I'm not quite sure if you were inspired by "My Little Dashie" or not but the resemblance is there. Either way this is an excellent comic, even though I didn't use the music(my laptop didn't want to play it). When I got to the end I just about cried.
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BubbleRevolution Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Shit, I'm so sorry for that comment. I didn't mean to post that.
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BubbleRevolution Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sanic 06

broken game
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:iconlaurentiusje:
Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but... but... why did she have to leaf :(
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:icondragonblader19:
dragonblader19 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this actually made me cry
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:iconcyfrostan:
cyfrostan Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Ah, it's you, I've seen this comic somewhere before. One would prolly assume Eq daily, but I haven't visited that site in ages so I wouldn't be so certain about that.

Anyway, loved it then and I love it now, great story bro, but I don't really wanna read it again. It's one of those stories you'll remember possibly for your whole life, but rarely would you want to come back to something so heart wrenching.

Great job, great job.
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:iconescagorouge:
escagorouge Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Thanks ^_^
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:iconcyfrostan:
cyfrostan Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
It was buried somewhere deep inside my favorites so I added it to the "devious collection" so it will be closer to the surface.
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:icongreenhatman:
Greenhatman Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
In every fandom, there are fan works that really touch the heart, and this is certainly one of them for MLP. It ties with "My Little Dashie" as a story that just sucked me in, and was engaging from beginning to end, and your choice of, "Farewell to Peace" as the soundtrack was PERFECT in setting the mood. Still, while this is superb, now I can't help but wish there was a story about a pony coming to our world, becoming best friends with a human, then heading back to Equestria, but also having the human come along as well. We need a happy ending for once!

Bravo to you, for such a beautiful comic!
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QuirkyWallace Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I came upon this again when I was looking through my favorites. Tears still flow from my eyes when I read this. ;_;
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:iconscrumptiousdude:
ScrumptiousDude Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why can't ponies look like that in real life :(
God fucked up somewhere...
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:iconscrumptiousdude:
ScrumptiousDude Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That... Was... Amazing.... You've inspired me
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:iconhoshizaku:
Hoshizaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
This is a quality product; the only thing I can call you out for is the text. You have to be exceptionally clear if you want to hand-write the text, otherwise reading it will be difficult and detract from the story.

On that note, I had to look at the URL to figure out what the title of this comic is, so I think it's fair to say that your title page failed its purpose.
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:iconmatty4z:
matty4z Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
wow your penmenship is amazing
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:iconhunterxiii:
hunterXIII Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student
This was...very beautiful. I am left with tears of joy. Well done.
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:iconmars261:
mars261 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
This is a work of art
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:icontravis-zenryo:
travis-zenryo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
one of the best things ive read in a long time this comic was simply amazing (especially with the soundtrack going ) thank you for posting
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:iconsarlona:
Sarlona Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
...I'm past manly tears...

...I'm crying fountains of sad...
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:iconrandist:
Randist Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Very touching... Crying manly tears now...
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:iconkeilink:
Keilink Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Our knowledge has made us cynical; our cleverness, hard and unkind. We think too much and feel too little"
- Charles Spencer Chaplin -

Everytime I look at something related to MLP, fan-fictions, wonderful fan arts, those words resonate in my head, and nothing can describe it more than your work now.

Respect,
Keilink.
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quibassi12 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
:o this is soo sad
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:iconstrawberryvertigo:
StrawberryVertigo Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
It was short but very creative and lovely! Anyone can write a long masterpiece of a comic but sometimes amazing masterpieces come in short things
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:iconharuka-katoaka:
Haruka-Katoaka Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
So bittersweet. So sad. And I don't even watch MLP that much.
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:iconheerofluffy:
HEEROFLUFFY Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
WOW!
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:iconrennleisaber:
RennleiSaber Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was very touching and emotional, honestly.
On the brink of tears.
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:iconppdraw:
PPDraw Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice, very nice story!
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TheLonelyBrony Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
now all you need is a camera, a camera man, a video editer and a video animator (I recommend oppositebros :iconoppositebros: ) and you can make the first real pony fanfic video
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escagorouge Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
he's pretty good.
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:iconthelonelybrony:
TheLonelyBrony Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know and I would love to be the camera man too I have taken a new media course so I know how to use a camera properly and somewhat of digital editing
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escagorouge Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
ahhh.
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